Pitch Feedback

From the feedback we gathered from our pitch, I can tell that our idea was well-recieved. However, we did get some negative feedback. But this was mainly due to the delivery of our pitch, not the content. It was said that we were not clear about the content of the video, and also that we did not explain every point that we were required to. After we started again and added extra content explaining exactly what was going to happen in the video (see "Our Complete Script") the feedback became positive. Other problems highlighted were due to the use of a chav as our protagonist, our target audience may not tell that this is an indie video. However we argue that due to the constant performance within the video, in which our band our dressed in recogniseable "indie" clothes, our target audience will tell that this is an indie video.